Song for the Last Act
Now that I have your face by heart, I look
This is not a matter of simply memorizing someone’s features, but truly knowing them, understanding their expressions, moods, and tendencies.
The world that “frame[s]” her listener is darkening. This ties into the title of the poem, adding a feeling of temporality to the setting. These lines are spoken as if they are some kind of conclusion. They could be a final statement ending or closing out a particular period of time.
olfactory too
Lie with quilled dahlias and the shepherd’s crook.
Beyond, a garden. There, in insolent ease
The lead and marble figures watch the show tactile
Of yet another summer loath to go personification: allusion to the end of things
Although the scythes hang in the apple trees.
Now that I have your face by heart, I look. kinaesthetic
Now that I have your voice by heart, I read
In the black chords upon a dulling page
Music that is not meant for music’s cage,
This line refers to music, particularly music notation, which is fading. It is as if she has caught it just in time to know what the world will soon lose. She speaks of the music as something which is not meant for music’s cage. It has become mixed with “words that shake and bleed.” This description is easier to understand when applied to love. Love, is not meant to be in a cage. Even if that cage was made with love in mind
The staves are shuttled over with a stark
Unprinted silence. In a double dream
I must spell out the storm, the running stream.
The beat’s too swift. The notes shift in the dark.
she is attempting to come to terms with a larger world. She wants to increase her connection with the elements she has been ignoring, in favour of this person for so long. The speaker is having a hard time understanding what she is seeing and must take the time to “spell out” the landscape. Everything seems to be “shift[ing]” making any clear view impossible.
Now that I have your heart by heart, I see
This time though she has memorized this person’s “voice by heart.” She knows them well enough that she can look away and give her attention to something else. The speaker is beginning to see other elements of life aside from this one person. They were the overwhelming focus of her time.
The rigging and the cargo and the slaves
On a strange beach under a broken sky. the world is still not quite in the right order.
O not departure, but a voyage done!
The ships the speaker sees sitting in the harbour are not preparing for a voyage. Their journey is done. Here is another instance of an ending, corresponding with those mentioned previously. While there is not one clear part of the speaker’s life coming to an end one, one certainly understands that things are changing.
Its red rust downward, and the long vine creeps
Beside the salt herb, in the lengthening sun.
Now that I have your heart by heart, I see. turning point: no reason to continue toxicity
The poem concludes with a final use of the refrain. This time though it is the listener’s heart she has memorized. This line can be taken in two different ways. First, that they are so close she knows his heart like her own and/or that she now sees him as he really is. It is likely a combination of these two things that makes her long for a change.
a) why so?
-diction:
The poem uses a stale and almost archaic choice of words that becomes more unstable as the poem progresses, as we can see that the language used in the first stanza in contrast to the second where "dulling," "staves," "darkening," "architraves" etc descends into a more ominous tone, providing the progression of the poem with the use of more vivid figurative language.
Blurred lines between literal and figurative language,
Progression of the poem uses vivid visual imagery that dampens the reader with a sense of melancholy under its initial bright tones, where 'summer' contrasts to the harshness of 'loathes', and 'apples' lie in contrast to the bladed steel of 'scythes'.
"black chords, dulling pages, shake and bleed, and the anchor weeps under a broken sky."
-imagery: visual, kinaesthetic, auditory:music, tactile
-sound: alliteration: consonance, assonance,
-form: dramatic mono
What is your understanding of the poem?
a) What is it about?
works as a mental and emotional stopping point for the speaker in this relationship. She is finally looking beyond her partner to everything fading and changing. The season of summer, a pattern of music, and a ship’s voyage all mark the end of something.
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