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REFLEXIVE WRITING

 reflexivity: the embodied researcher; looking at yourself looking in the mirror.
How are YOU affecting your work, a way to approach interpretation as the same part of the same whole as the same truth. 



Reflexive: introspective/self-reflection, looking at your own implication in a situation while creating the text; the influences absorbed and presented ,decisions and effects
in the creative process, how and what it says of who you are as a writer in this frame of time

aware from conception to process to draft 1 2 3

Response to reading poem for the first time?
Resonate?
What you like? Why?
What dyou dislike? Why?
What is the truth behind this poem?

REVISING
Essay on poem written
diction, figurative language, syntax, arrangement of lines, breaks and white space, grammar.
Pick best lines
Experiment with verbs tweak suggest
Highlight, group, images

STRUCTURE- 
HIGHLIGHTS SALIENT POINTS
This essay unpacks the creative process of my two poems titled () and (), on the focal point of conception, implementation, and revision. The selected revisions in turn will be expounded under the framework of reflexivity.
-Working with a voice and tones that fit the intention of the poem

OUTSTANDING KNOWLEDGE OF MATERIAL: INNOVATIVE AND ORIGINAL CONTENT
ANALYTICAL CONCEPTS, FOCUSED ARGUMENT

OUTSTANDING CRITICISMS TOWARDS EVIDENCE OF EXISTING DEBATES, - line in poem, struggles, decisions, before and after in drafts, MHRA citations of references, influence, inspirations

Process of writing for both poems

                           SIN 
meek measures taken     a muted mug  still tinkling as i swill   
at each pill      a pause      i listen to its tune thinking before i swallow
sing    play    yearn     notess     pool silky refrain hold
two drops                of sweat glistening on soft dunes of skin
eerie tingling ache unsurfaced held
release in the k  e  y    
    o
      f      
         
              G               

(3: reframe poolsilky refrain hold interpreted as drink/liquid. Revise.)
(4: juxtapose liquid with sweat—image parallelism)
(5: foregrounded padat)
(6: weaker, play on space not constrained within a line to exaggerate )
Redundancy does mean stagnancy and lack of progression e.g. pause meek muted
(1: tinkle connotations)


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