Write 2 distinct memories as premises, and when joined together, portraying a state of emotion in the present. https://youtu.be/LeHs9oQo2zA?si=5WS4IggRmRbvKiD4
Form:
Interweaves two individual poems, usually side by side, to create a third new poem. (fun fact! it gets its name from contrapuntal music, which features more than one melody playing simultaneously.)
Read in three distinct ways: 1st individual poem, 2nd individual poem, and 3rd combined poem out of the previous 2.
Characteristics:
Both individual poems have relation to each other.
Each line is crafted so that the third poem produced out of the combination is legible.
Each reading should produce a different/distinct meaning.
ONE
A car ride back home from the airport
silence after slicing a finger under the running water red
Sweltering heat, goosebumps in a bus-stop full of strangers
Realising that he will never again be there to cut my hair.
When her songs weakened, dulled, and ceased.
When my breathing stopped, stolen I could not take in air,
and my worth dropped from the price of one to none,
Love only shown on the dinner table— if my mouth could water, my heart would too.
When eyes once alive turn rheumy to darkness, denied of healing hugs
Touch-starved unquenchable hurt in an acquaintance’s embrace
My legs gnarled by swimming pool water, mocking clouds.
No one to sit with during class trips.
Memories of a greyscale childhood.
Again and again, I'm the only one drawing castles in the sky.
When finally, there are people telling me “Happy Birthday” unprompted.
A trolleybus, foreign voices, foreign buildings - the start of something new.
Eyes that smile when they see me.
Hurdled together in a thin blanket, it's the stranger's kindness that warms me.
I stand among a sea of strangers, walking against the current.
I walk among golden wheat fields away from the dark forest, towards grey skies.
TWO
Line and Space
A lone cab ride to an empty home from the airport. A trolleybus, foreign voices, foreign buildings - the start of something new.
silence after slicing a finger under the running water red. My legs gnarled by swimming pool water, mocking clouds.
Sweltering heat, goosebumps in a bus-stop full of strangers. No one to sit with during class trips.
Realisation that he will never again be there to cut my hair. Memories of a grey scale childhood.
When her songs weakened, dulled, and ceased. Eyes that smile when they see me.
When my breathing stopped, stolen I could not take in air. Hurdled together in a thin blanket, it's the stranger's kindness that warms me.
and my worth dropped from the price of one to none. Again and again, I'm the only one drawing castles in the sky.
Love only shown on the dinner table— if my mouth could water, my heart would too. When finally, there are people telling me “Happy Birthday” unprompted.
When eyes once alive turn rheumy to darkness, denied healing hugs. I walk among golden wheat fields away from the dark forest, towards grey skies.
Touch-starved unquenchable hurt in an acquaintance’s embrace. I stand among a sea of strangers, walking against the current.
THREE
lone cab ride empty home airport. I laugh with new clouds under the same sky.
silence after slicing a finger under the running water red. Gnarled by swimming pool water as the clouds mock me,
Sweltering heat, goosebumps in a bus-stop full of strangers. No one to sit with during class trips.
Realisation that he will never again be there to cut my hair. Memories of a grey scale childhood.
When her songs weakened, dulled, and ceased. Eyes that smile when they see me.
When my breathing stopped, stolen I could not take in air. Hurdled together in a thin blanket, it's the stranger's kindness that warms me.
and my worth dropped from the price of one to none. Again and again, I'm the only one drawing castles in the sky.
Love only shown on the dinner table— if my mouth could water, my heart would too. When finally, there are people telling me “Happy Birthday” unprompted.
When eyes once alive turn rheumy to darkness, denied healing hugs. I walk among golden wheat fields away from the dark forest, towards grey skies.
Touch-starved unquenchable hurt in an acquaintance’s embrace. I stand among a sea of strangers, walking against the current.
FOUR
Fishes have lungs when breathing stops
My father sang their songs stolen, I cannot take in air
to me for dinner finally, they sing, "Happy Birthday!"
I cried silent hook in my mouth watering love only shown on the makan table
the breath of wind ignited rheumy darkness in eyes once alive
the fishing line, a noodle denying healing hugs
maggi ayam embrace touch starved, unquenchable hurt
sweet realisation: "Snap!"
A figment of labour at sea alone, walking against the current
the present where I see fishes laughing
in the sky evanescent memories of a greyscale childhood
mirages drawing castles in the sky.
the salt-water is breathing life slice my finger running red, silently
into me. seeps the stranger's kindness
FIVE
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